You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern abo

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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

explain why you are writing

express concern about the missing card

ask them what they intend to do

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address

Dear Sir,

I am writing in response to your letter requesting for an acknowledgement of the receipt of my debit card however I would like to inform you that the debit card was missing from the envelope sent to my official address.

To elucidate I have an association of nearly a decade with your reputed bank and such an incident has happened for the first time therefore I am deeply concerned regarding my misuse of my debit card. Although I immediately called your customer care number and informed the phone banking representative of such an incident. The latest update I have from them is that the complaint has been locked with reference number xdfr56788 and they are investigating this matter internally.

Additionally I would also be keen to know what immediate actions would you able to take to address this issue and avoid any misuse of my banking card.

I look forward to your immediate response.

Yours sincerely

Saud

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in response to your letter ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e envelope sent to my official address. To elucidate I have an association of ne...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...investigating this matter internally. Additionally I would also be keen to know what immed...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, regarding, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81543323369 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635220125786 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3556770906 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288185975825 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116144013756 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690882496149 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154531250382 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806656698523 0.0580467560999 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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