Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to notify you of my concerns about missing the new bank card which your bank sent me a letter to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card two days ago. However, I check the envelope carefully and find that no card was enclosed when I open it.
I have been maintaining a checking account with your bank last for 3 years. I requested a new silver debit card. I received the letter yesterday, nevertheless, I noticed that the card was missing. I am concerned about the whereabouts of the card. It might be misused if it goes to the wrong hand. Will the bank be responsible for it?
Therefore, I would like you to cancel and hold this card so no one else can use it, also issue me another card and take step so that it does not happen again.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s. I requested a new silver debit card. I received the letter yesterday, neverthe...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s, I noticed that the card was missing. I am concerned about the whereabouts of t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35802469136 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47705520107 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7103262668 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1818181818 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48906755949 0.216113520407 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146123726334 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126587981849 0.0603063233224 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258001694939 0.12726935374 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155962876959 0.0580467560999 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.