Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding a bag that I left on one of your planes. I flew from Tokyo to London in flight number XZ1234 of your airline company last week. After I reached the hotel, I realized that I had left my bag on the planes. I am hoping you would help me recover it along with its content immediately.
I kept the bag under my seat which is a black leather bag, medium in size with a pocket in the front. My bag contains a small size wind jacket, a pen and some documents. I need these documents within a few days and they are utterly important to me.
Therefore, I would deeply appreciate it if you could give me a prompt reply as soon as possible. I can be reached on my mobile phone at +012345678912.
Thank you for your kind cooperation. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: medium
...r my seat which is a black leather bag, medium in size with a pocket in the front. My bag cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34161490683 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5305966889 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2523407008 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.25 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327467840395 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10266191894 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613376663278 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182177948179 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102293230691 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.