Dear Amber,
I hope you are doing well with your family. I planned to take my cat Nasa to a pet hotel when I was away from home during this holiday. The pet hotel was full so I was worried that my cat will have no one to look after. Fortunately, I am glad that you can offer time to my house and take care of Nasa.
I will take a flight to Japan next Friday and you can reach me by mobile phone if it did not connect, you can contact the holiday resort named “Release Hotel”, number 12341234569 and let them redirect the call to my room.
Nasa used to have two meals in the morning and evening that you can feed at 8:00 am and 6:00 pm. The cat food and her favourite toy are in the café table drawer in the living room. Please help me to fill her food bowl and change the water in the basin every meal. In addition, I hired a time maid to help with cleaning. The maid comes every morning at 8:00 am and you make sure she sweeps the floor and washes the dishes every day.
Thank you for your help.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.07766990291 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.88464583007 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606796116505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6076271018 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181356578058 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710048341538 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821118152162 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146677615912 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101949129821 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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