Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire about a bag which I forgot on flight 645 heading to london last week.
my name is Connor McGregor, I was one of the passengers that boarded flight 645 heading from New York to london on the 23rd August 2012. Unfortunately, i left my bag on the plane, and only noticed it when I got back to my hotel. I must have left it on my seat after taking out my phone from it.
it is a black Gucci bag, with red strips at the front. The bag has a golden design at the bottom, the Gucci logo is encrusted on the hand of the bag. Some valuable items are inside the bag; items like my driver license, my national ID card, keys to my office and apartment which is attached to a silver key holder.
I would be grateful if the bag can be send to my hotel. Room 32, Majesty Royal Imperial hotel, number 23, Washington street, Stratford, london.
Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
connor McGregor
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...liest convenience. Yours faithfully, connor McGregor
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40760869565 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37628062181 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657608695652 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5596987166 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247526021143 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898225874841 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582750597095 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129269541713 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311822974016 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.