Hi Tina,
I am glad to see a letter from you and extremely happy by hearing the news that you moving to the city where I am staying and also super excited that you are going to stay with me for some short time.
It’s been quite a long since we last were in touch, but I haven’t forgotten all the wonderful time we spent together when we were in college. I want to tell you more stories about my current job, the activities I have done after my studies many more. I am eagerly waiting to meet you.
Some of my office colleagues also staying near to Bogor region where you are going to work. Moreover, I already inform them to check a good place for your stay. Furthermore, I collected some agents’ numbers who can help us to find a nice home for you based on needs. Don’t worry I am always here to help you because you’re my best buddy.
The place where I am staying has many beautiful islands where we can go for activities such as have the snorkeling, diving, banana boat, and many water sports are available. I know you like to visit the beaches and play water sports, thus let us have fun together. I will invite Neha and Rami from our childhood friends they are also staying near to my town.
Waiting for your arrival, have a safe flight. Convey my regards to aunty and uncle.
Best regards,
Lima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Tina, I am glad to see a letter from you and e...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
... collected some agents’ numbers who can help us to find a nice home for you based on needs. Don...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rds to aunty and uncle. Best regards, Lima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38866396761 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21712322573 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9765543059 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4285714286 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294609292118 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917393008913 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723260894686 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159757408717 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636299794957 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.