You have received a letter from your university of Albion demanding a reason for your absence
from an exam. You were ill that day, but failed to submit the evidence. Write a letter to the
Examinations Committee explaining your situation. You should include:
– Apologies for the situation
– Identification for yourself (Name, Student Number, Case Number)
– An explanation of what had happened and any possible evidence you may have
– Possible resolutions to consider.
To the university of Albion exam committee,
I am writing this in response to your letter that I have received, with regards to my unofficial leave, during exams because of illness.
To begin with, I am Farwah Ahmad. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience that, I have caused, as I have skipped my final-term exam without informing the exam authority.
I am a student of the Batch fall 2018, BS Computer engineering. my roll number is Fa-2018-CS-207, and currently enrolled in 6th semester.
I am a kidney patient, and have stones in both the kidneys. Due to that, I suffered from swear Urinary Tract Infection. On top of that, I was having 102 fever, that I was not able to move even. For that reason, I called the doctor for home checkup. He advised me for complete bed rest. Please, find my medical certificate and prescription attached for your perusal.
Furthermore, It is a request, to allow me, to reappear in the examination so that I can be promoted to next semester as it was the final term paper. I hope that this does not cause you any problem.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the university of Albion exam committee, I am writing this in response to your le...
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...ed, with regards to my unofficial leave, during exams because of illness. To b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m without informing the exam authority. I am a student of the Batch fall 2018, B...
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Suggestion: My
...tch fall 2018, BS Computer engineering. my roll number is Fa-2018-CS-207, and curr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
... to hearing from you at the earliest. regards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85180206185 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.789675887 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213185496479 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594108664689 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612808818859 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099207099461 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549458419299 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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