You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say
– Give details of the job.
– Why do you think the interview went well?
– Why do you need to know the result?
Dear Sir,
I appeared for an interview in your corporation on Thursday. I am writing to seek some information regarding the result of my interview.
Last month, I applied for the position of Full Stack Developer in your company. After clearing a couple of written tests and technical round, I was called for the personal interview. Since my academic skills were evaluated earlier, in this interview, my salary and location were discussed, along with my personality test.
From my perspective, I surely impressed the interviewer, partly with my educational qualifications and remaining with my enthusiasm for extracurricular activities. However, I have not received any feedback from the HR team.
Apart from applying to your firm, I also submitted my application to another company. Although the remuneration is not up to my expectation, I received an employment offer from that company. In case, I get hired by you, I would decline this offer, otherwise, I will have to accept it.
I hope you would understand my situation and provide me with the results of my performance. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Tina
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| 2018-12-18 | vinshu koul | 80 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25405405405 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18531143087 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0829091311 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7692307692 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121693839713 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515558422325 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04364172916 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828082857972 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442978639299 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.