You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity and say
– What was it about?
– Explain why it was helpful to you.
– Suggest other co-workers participate in this course.
Respected sir,
I am writing this letter to share my wonderful experience regarding the professional course I attended few days ago. It was mostly regarding the use of a proper physical environment as well as the habit one needs to acquire while they are at the workplace. It provided information stating that the environment will have a great impact on the productivity of an individual. For instance, when the lighting in the room is not efficient, then it will prohibit the individual to focus and concentrate on their work due to inefficient vision caused by improper lighting.
I have always noticed that when I reached home, I always had a headache and back pain. After attending this program, I figured out that the reason for my physical pain was nothing but the small uncushioned chair and working with the electronics without wearing any UV rays glasses. So, now I have decided that I will make use of proper spectacles as well as the chair to avoid any kind of physical strain.
Furthermore, I personally suggest this course to my colleagues as it will provide all the ways and methods that they might adopt to avoid any physical or mental stress. For example, in the course the professional talks about the tactics to maintain a healthy balance between work and family life which will eliminate all the conflicts arising from the class of both personal and professional life.
I am really grateful to you for recommending such a helpful and useful course.
thanking you,
your sincere
Hitakshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ll the ways and methods that they might adopt to avoid any physical or mental stress. Fo...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
...ing such a helpful and useful course. thanking you, your sincere Hitakshi
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ul course. thanking you, your sincere Hitakshi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, regarding, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9140625 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79154520103 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0119362382 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221186351503 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796805479565 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056497328495 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112454518141 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192957062407 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.