Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Divya, am writing this letter to show my strong dissatisfaction with the product, telephone with an answering machine, which I purchased recently from your online amazon store with Rupees 12,500.
In detail, I bought this product with great interest because it was mentioned on the site that I could receive the messages from the people whom I couldn’t answer. But, in reality, I have not received any messages from the people who called me a couple of weeks ago, instead, I am receiving only those which are very recent. However, I think the product displayed and explained on the site is way different from the product which I purchased.
Hence, I would ask you to exchange the product with the answering machine which can store the messages since day one. Otherwise, I would ask you to refund the full amount to my credit card or else, I will be contacting the Bureau of Consumer Protection if I do not hear back from you in regards to this within a week.
I anticipate a positive response at earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Divya Reddy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir/Madam, I, Divya, am writing this letter to show my strong d...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...otection if I do not hear back from you in regards to this within a week. I anticipate a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88586956522 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69358594549 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657608695652 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.458524841 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28440584772 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102377036638 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852512643481 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140158696697 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918831102335 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.