Dear Sir,
I am a student of your university and I am writing to you to formally complaint about the problems that I have recently come across and which are making it difficult to continue my studies here.
I am a first year student of Hospital management, it is a correspondence course, supposed to be of two years. I am a doctor by profession and wish to become a hospital administrator in future. With regards to it, I already have spoken with the HR head and they are happy to hire me once I receive the degree. But to my surprise, I recently got an email from the university stating that the duration of this programme has extended, so, now it is a three year course. Due to this delay, I will not be able to get a job next year which I desperately need. In addition, I have not yet received all the study material required for the exam next month.
Lastly, I would like you to reconsider this decision as it will affect hundreds of students. The best solution is to not implement this rule to the old students as it is not fair. In the failure of my attempt, I will be constrained to consult my lawyer and to seek justice through court of law. Also, I want you to give strict instructions to the concerned department to send all the remaining books swiftly.
Waiting for your prompt action.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f two years. I am a doctor by profession and wish to become a hospital administra...
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Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...wish to become a hospital administrator in future. With regards to it, I already have spo...
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Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prompt action. Yours sincerely, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45714285714 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70671031261 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587755102041 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1229746386 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122893919491 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406593813546 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441635761196 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791096680384 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431431238828 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.