You have recently got involved in a car accident and there was damage to both your car and your health. Fortunately you have both car premium insurance as well as health insurance. Write a letter to the insurance manager:
Explaining your membership details
How the accident happened
What compensation or funds are you expecting
Dear Sir,
My name is Alex Ferguson and I am a premium health insurance member of your company, Delta Insurance. In addition to this, my vehicle also has full coverage insurance with Insurance no.249999. I am writing to you to claim monetary benefits due to a recent accident that happened while I was driving my car.
Last week, on a foggy Monday, I was driving to downtown London on the 20th August, 2018, when suddenly a truck started to skid on the icy road. In order to avoid crashing into the truck, I pushed my car brake down hard, however, due to the momentum of the car, it continued on for a couple of seconds, hitting the car at more than 20 kilometers per hour. There was a deafening noise and the airbag went off. My hand hit the side window and the bone on my right shoulder got dislocated. I was hospitalized after an ambulance rushed me to the hospital.
The police filed a full report of the accident, which is inserted inside the envelope with this letter. They reviewed CCTV footage from the area and concluded that I was not at fault for the incident. Hence, as per with your rules and regulations, I am expecting full coverage of my vehicle repair and my own medical fees, the bills of which are attached in an e-mail to you. Since I have a premium membership, hence I am expecting you to provide me the promised service once the incident is investigated from your company.
With Regards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2018'.
Suggestion: August 2018
... driving to downtown London on the 20th August, 2018, when suddenly a truck started to skid ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53307392996 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54456858689 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4693943228 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256163316524 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743681383666 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692437691376 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173474361063 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074752518658 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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