You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
express concern (i.e. say you are sorry to hear what has happened)
tell them about a similar experience that you once had
give some advice or offer help
Dear James,
I am shocked to hear the news of your house being flooded due to heavy rains that hit the city last Saturday. I can imagine what are you going through as I myself was a victim of a similar situation few years ago.
You remember July 2016 floods which drowned Mumbai? We were residing at ground floor that time. Within few minutes of heavy showers we found ourselves covered with water. We were so shocked that we didn’t knew how to react in the situation. I remember my family running here and there to seek shelter from the downpour. Our home was completely destroyed with all our belongings getting drenched.
I am deeply concerned about your situation right now. Though it is not possible to undo what has happened, we can always start fresh. If you want I will fly down to Delhi and assist in redecorating your house.
Waiting to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Kutub.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74213836478 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35697225762 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729559748428 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4986820556 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2307692308 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 4.34317383033 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151532790851 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514261479335 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574712982116 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113553060136 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587085608415 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.