You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
express concern (i.e. say you are sorry to hear what has happened)
tell them about a similar experience that you once had
give some advice or offer help
Dear John,
I am so upset to hear the news of your house being affected due to heavy rains that hit Delhi recently. It is sad to learn that the damage was severe and you have suffered physically, mentally and even financially.
I understand the situation you are going through as I myself was a victim of similar incident few years ago. Do you remember 2016 floods? My home too was destroyed in it. I had incurred huge financial loss in renovating my house. My furnitures, carpet and even the paint was completely damaged.
I would suggest you to stay calm in this situation and focus on the future steps that need to be taken, rather than thinking about the loss which is irreversible. I will advise you to contact the insurance agency first and then slowly concentrate on interior work that need to be done. If you need any assistance regarding the same, please feel free to get in touch with me.
Waiting to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Kutub.
- Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher.Following his advise, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say.What is your motivation to learn a new languageHow can the teacher help you?W 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 163, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng about the loss which is irreversible.i will advice you to contact the insuranc...
^
Line 11, column 170, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...t the loss which is irreversible.i will advice you to contact the insurance agency fir...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70760233918 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50680139081 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707602339181 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3968075773 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1818181818 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143921453523 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048535872779 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361189732566 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912137282758 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233658381625 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.