You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sarah,
Hope you in good health. I am really excited to share the news that i have just moved into a new apartment which i bought from my personal savings on the 1st of September.
My previous landlord was causing a lot of trouble for me and it had become almost become impossible to live at that place. The bathroom flush was leaking, and my landlord didn't get it repaired despite it was clearly mentioned in the contract. Also, the wooden kitchen cabinet was full of termites and no fumigation has been carried out even on several requests.
The new house is based on 4 rooms including 2 bedrooms with attached bathroom, a living room and kitchen. The house is very cozy and warm. As of now, I was able to furnish the bedrooms and living area, however, the kitchen needs some amendments.
In order to celebrate this happy moment, I would like to invite you at my place coming Saturday, September 8, 2019 at 6:30 pm. We would watch a movie and would do dinner together. You have always been of great support since the time i moved in this country and i would love to celebrate this joyful event with you.
See you on Saturday.
Yours Sincerely,
Shazia Iqbal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sarah, Hope you in good health. I am really exc...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e just moved into a new apartment which i bought from my personal savings on the ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...room flush was leaking, and my landlord didnt get it repaired despite it was clearly ...
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Line 17, column 88, Rule ID: DATE_WEEKDAY[2]
Message: The date September 8, 2019 is not a Saturday, but a Sunday.
...d like to invite you at my place coming Saturday, September 8, 2019 at 6:30 pm. We would watch a movie and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ys been of great support since the time i moved in this country and i would love ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ce the time i moved in this country and i would love to celebrate this joyful eve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you on Saturday. Yours Sincerely, Shazia Iqbal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64622641509 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37786382769 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655660377358 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7249336476 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7692307692 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158156549123 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530910357613 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470410542344 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814948646817 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500870505414 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.