You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letterExplain why you have moved.Describe the new house.Invite your friend to come and visit.

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You have recently moved to a different house.

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter

Explain why you have moved.
Describe the new house.
Invite your friend to come and visit.

Dear John,

I am writing you to let you know that I have changed my old house and moved into the better one. It is situated across the street from the pervious one.

My last house was based on old construction. It needed an immediate renovation as most of the plaster on the ceiling was falling apart. So, inspite of bearing a expenditure of setting up an old house from scratch I decided to bought a new one. In addition, I was in a search of house with more rooms as my parents are planning to visit me for a month. They will be needing their separate room to stay.

This new house has two bedrooms and a separate living room which would be great in terms of comfort for my family hoping to visit next week. Moreover, it is situated around the corner of the street from where super market and park is only few minutes walk away. In this way, it will be easy for my parents to entertain themselves while I'll be on my job.

I wish, you could also pay a visit with your family whenever you get a break from your job.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

All the best,

Nusrah

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... house was based on old construction. It needed an immediate renovation as most o...
^^
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s falling apart. So, inspite of bearing a expenditure of setting up an old house ...
^
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ning to visit me for a month. They will be needing their separate room to stay. This n...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...y parents to entertain themselves while Ill be on my job. I wish, you could also...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, while, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32211538462 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19605259601 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5390611564 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133832895293 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439822564066 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634108508185 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950762466148 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673650122272 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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