You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved.
Describe the new house.
Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Joy,
How are you? I hope you are doing well in your studies. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have moved in your country last week. I got a job offer from Nestle Canada last month and the post of Quality Manager in Quality department.
This new accommodation is provided by the organization and it includes 2 big bedrooms, kitchen and lounge. The most beautiful thing about house is its color combination with interior design in different rooms. Most of the walls are made up of wood unlike Indian houses which are made from bricks, sand and cement material. In addition to that, swimming pool is fitted with water heating system which makes me feel amazing.
You must come and visit this place and I am sure you will like it. Let’s catch-up in my new house on coming weekend. Please do not forget to bring your younger brother, I want to see him.
I will be waiting for you, please confirm before Wednesday so that I can do little preparations.
With regards,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joy, How are you? I hope you are doing well i...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I have moved in your country last week. I got a job offer from Nestle Canada last...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g system which makes me feel amazing. You must come and visit this place and I...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eparations. With regards, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67039106145 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42048414267 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709497206704 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1544348451 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3076923077 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19627915061 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669474232383 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737494231066 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113317951682 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810065273664 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.