You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Gujoo,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. I am so excited to inform you that I have recently moved to my new magnificent house in Lahore.
My house was under construction from past two years, and I was paying exuberant rentals on a rental flat. Therefore, it was extremely important for me to shift to my house. Finally, after expediting construction and renovation work it has now been completed. It is approx. 500 Sq. ft. two-storey house. Each storey have three bedrooms with attached bathroom, one store-room, a kitchen, and a huge living room. We also have a large beautiful lawn with an ample space for the kids to play.
I would love to invite you, to visit my new house in upcoming winter vacations with your family. I am confident that you would admire the construction and venue. We will have bonfire and a barbecue party on our roof-top. My address is: Townhouse Number 26/A Gulberg Town Lahore.
Looking forward to have enjoyable and blasting vacations. Please convey my sincere regards to uncle and aunty.
Best Regards,
Regards,
Farrukh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een completed. It is approx. 500 Sq. ft. two-storey house. Each storey have three...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...A Gulberg Town Lahore. Looking forward to have enjoyable and blasting vacations. Pleas...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rds to uncle and aunty. Best Regards, Regards, Farrukh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84042553191 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62936029034 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7015139479 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.875 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.75 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232168914439 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580514730687 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724981834325 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143917828096 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937081887684 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.