You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Amy,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and great spirits! I remember about giving me details of new place as soon as I reached; but, could not do it due to much work in getting settled to the environment. Today, finally I took a pen and thought to share about the same.
As you know, I was desperate to settle in Canada, and was trying to clear all the relevant examination to get the permanent residency. I finally got what I wanted and reached the dream land. I admire working in diverse environment, and learning cultures around the world; definitely, Canada is the place where I can find such diversity along with ambitious workplace. Indeed, this was the reason I wanted to migrate.
After reaching, the first thing that I was worried about was accommodation; but, I got a very nice house at reasonable rates in Toronto city. The family was moving to another location and wanted to sell it in short period, which I bought instantly. Although the house is small, it is lovely and enough for our small family. The main thing I admire is the big entrance and tiny garden having fresh vegetables planted.
I would love to see you at my new place. why don't you plan your summer vacation with us in Toronto ?I am sure, we would have lots of fun together.
Yours lovingly,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... as I reached; but, could not do it due to much work in getting settled to the env...
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Line 13, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...garden having fresh vegetables planted. I would love to see you at my new place....
^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
... would love to see you at my new place. why dont you plan your summer vacation with...
^^^
Line 17, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ld love to see you at my new place. why dont you plan your summer vacation with us i...
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Line 17, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...our summer vacation with us in Toronto ?I am sure, we would have lots of fun toge...
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Line 17, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re, we would have lots of fun together. Yours lovingly, XYZ
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, so, in short, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62553191489 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49654899883 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651063829787 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4233784272 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6153846154 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134902413894 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459992228056 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548033960893 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080131424496 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695347162987 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.