You have recently moved to a new flat. Unfortunately, you lost some money the other day and can not afford to pay next month's rent which is due. Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation and that you will pay as soon as your parents send the money. Also, mention that there are some problems with the flat.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that due to some circumstances, I am not able to pay the next month’s rent on the due date. It might get delay by a few days.
The reason for this is that my wallet gets picked in a bus two days ago when I was returning home from work. Along with some money, I lost my ATM card too. Hence, I am unable to withdraw money from my account. The bank will take a week to re-issue my card. Meanwhile, I have asked my parents to send me some cash as soon as it arrive I will definitely pay you the rent.
I would also like to inform you that the geyser in my bathroom is not functioning. Whenever, I tried to turn it on, it emits a spark which is worrying. Also, the fan in the drawing room makes a lot of noise when I turned it on. it would be grateful if you get these things repaired at the earliest.
I would like to apologize again for the delay in playing the rent to you.
Your faithfully,
Kirti
- These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. 84
- You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, and you are having a wonderfull time. You promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion.Write a letter to you travel agent as promised, and let him kn 73
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’sdevelopment while others think that it is important for children to go to school.Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. 78
- Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment Introduce yourself describe problems you are facing because of this suggest solutions 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arrives'?
Suggestion: arrives
...ents to send me some cash as soon as it arrive I will definitely pay you the rent. ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... these things repaired at the earliest. I would like to apologize again for the ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent to you. Your faithfully, Kirti
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10994764398 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31608976785 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5005078121 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3846153846 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294588734569 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865143213918 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984516125403 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164842501407 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720406125993 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.