Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s
development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
A section of society believes that homeschooling is best for the intellectual development of a child. While other opine that formal education is necessary for discretion expansion of a kid. I strongly believe that formal education is essential for the overall development of a youth; over the course of this essay, we will discuss both.
There are various reasons, why people prefer homeschooling for the future growth of their youngster. The primary reason is a safe and comfortable environment of the home. Consequently, the toddler gets less distracted and can focus full of their energy on learning new thing. Apart from this, they are not bounded with time constraint while learning. Another reason is that parents are well aware of the weakness of their children. As a result, parents can raise effective way to iron out their deficiencies; help them to excel. For example, when I was a kid, I was paranoid about mathematics then my father used interactive learning to make mathematics interesting to me. Therefore, I started loving numbers with the help of that terminology; and I credit preschooling for the success; after all, charity begins a home.
On the other hand, formal education is an accepted societal none and has several benefits. Teachers in schools are well qualified to impart in-depth knowledge about various subjects. Hence, scientifically proved, teaching methodologies are an aid in the comprehensive evolution of juvenile. Nonetheless, school education teaches a child to be a team player and develop healthy competitive behavior. To illustrate, my school teacher taught us to help our classmates who were relatively weaker in studies. Therefore, it is abundantly clear that formal education is crucial for the overall progress of a child.
To sum up, it is proved that the advantage of school education overweigh homeschooling. It insists the adolescent use scientific technique for learning; imbibe healthy competitive nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, after all, apart from, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34951456311 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09798845921 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.548630822 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228097977052 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621095949555 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045050207144 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129781511023 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501198150925 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.