You have recently ordered an item from the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter
Describe what you purchased
Explain why you are not happy with the purchase
Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction with the smartphone I have purchased from your online shop two days ago on the 5th of July. I ordered a smartphone, Samsung model A2, which you have recommended your customers for buy as the best choice. I could receive it in 3 days. I have to say that I expected to get it in a shorter time, not after 3 days.
According to its manual, I charged it for about 12 hours. After charging I try to run it but unfortunately, it did not work. I tried to call your company immediately. Surprisingly, anyone answered me.
As the smartphone is under warranty I am entitled to ask for repair or replacement. I would prefer to receive a replacement of which. I would also like you to phone me personally when you receive this letter.
I expect to hear from you as soon as possible.
Kind Regards,
Sarah Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r customers for buy as the best choice. I could receive it in 3 days. I have to s...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t choice. I could receive it in 3 days. I have to say that I expected to get it i...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rsonally when you receive this letter. I expect to hear from you as soon as poss...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50617283951 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88593285505 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3942690923 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.1538461538 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23189890418 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614604662541 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766799709746 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136604956003 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063737941644 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.