Dear Peter,
I hope you are doing well. I’m writing to tell you about a gift that I bought for you from the Amazon website.
It’s a portable laptop table, which has cooling fans and USB ports. It’s very handy and thick on any type of surface area, also you can adjust the height as per your convenience. It has an adequate space, where you can place your other gadgets and stationery.
I’d like you to give in person, but I’m occupied with important work. Therefore, I will send it to you through Blue Dart Courier Company. I will mention your phone number so that you can contact them if you’re not obtaining it on time.
I chose this gift for you because It can improve your physical health and release your body pain, moreover, It can improve your work-ability while you are working from home.
Keep in touch.
Mayank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Peter I hope you are doing well Im writing to tell you about a gift that I...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ught for you from the Amazon website Its a portable laptop table which has cooli...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lace your other gadgets and stationery Id like you to give in person but Im occ...
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Suggestion: I'd
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Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 662.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41333333333 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0709632756 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 150.0 16.3608247423 917% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 662.0 76.5299724578 865% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 150.0 16.8248392259 892% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 56.0 4.34317383033 1289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328296845447 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.328296845447 0.0766984524023 428% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213201257952 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869780735635 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 74.3 8.37731958763 887% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -63.85 70.7449484536 -90% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 59.4 7.45979381443 796% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.48 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.71 7.59969072165 180% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 62.0 8.54432989691 726% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 8.15463917526 760% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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