People from non-native countries who have to speak a foreign language can affect severe social and practical problems. This essay completely agrees with this statement because people will not be able to build relationships with local residents and facing difficulty in pursuing their careers.
To begin with, Individuals who do not speak native language fail to understand local citizens, which leads to a social problem. That is to say that they hardly communicate with local people and fail to socialize with them. Therefore, they are facing challenges with their daily routine life. For example, many international students from India who I know studying in Germany find it difficult to make a relationship with local students because they don’t know how to communicate with them.
Another reason is that residents from other countries will find it challenging to work to deal with native workers. That is to say, in an organization, employees have to work as a team and it becomes difficult to cope up with other employees and clients. Therefore, they face many work-related issues because they lack communication with their colleagues and customers. For instance, many Indians I know in Denmark cannot obtain a job in the healthcare sector until they pass the Denis language exam because they have to interact with native patients.
In conclusion, it is necessary to learn the local language for people who migrate from non-native countries because it will benefit them to build a relationship with locals and help them to communicate with their co-workers and be able to obtain their dream job.
- You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends Write a letter to this friend In your letter tell him her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend 61
- An English speaking friend wants to spend a two week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 offer to find somewhere to stay 2 give advice about what to do 3 give information 100
- Government should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that young people should be ambitious Others believe that it is fine if young people do not have big aims in life Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- An English speaking friend wants to spend a two week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 offer to find somewhere to stay 2 give advice about what to do 3 give information 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...ther countries will find it challenging to work to deal with native workers. That is to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22393822394 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8077595981 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505791505792 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.375156561 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113517996228 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061165448118 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925196160562 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829096478989 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523917731616 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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