You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Hi Joanna,
Hope you are doing well. I’m writing to let you know that I’ve commenced to work for a new employer since last week.
I’ve changed my job because the new company agreed to hire me with a raise in salary by 40%. Besides this, they will also provide an accommodation in central London, a car and medical insurance for my entire family. Also, every six months I will be eligible for a break of 30 days.
As a Pay per click executive I have to drive online customers to visit our website and purchase a product. This means, I have to convince potential customers to click on our website link and buy an item. Once a potential customer clicks on the link and completes their customer journey into a sale, a commission triggered to me.
Apart from this, the other news is that, I’m pregnant. My husband was over the moon when I informed him about this last night. Next weekend he has thrown a party for close relatives and friends. I would be grateful if you could join with your hubby.
Hope to see you soon.
Kind regards,
Pearl
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...%. Besides this, they will also provide an accommodation in central London, a car and medical in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67708333333 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3977743496 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703125 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8453394948 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1428571429 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16571164491 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503870175704 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049006392717 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885299063495 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406332915674 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.