You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you changed jobs• describe your new job• tell him/her your other news

Essay topics:

You have recently started work in a new company.

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter

• explain why you changed jobs

• describe your new job

• tell him/her your other news

At first take my love. hope you are all well by the grace of Almighty. I am going to write about the reason of changing my company.

At first, I want to describe about the company that I have left named Samsung R&D institute, Bangladesh. The colleagues here specially my team members were too much friendly. As well as the working environment was great. Overall it was a great journey. I was working there as a software engineer. But I was thinking to change my track for a long days. That's why I have joined as a senior lecturer of a university. teaching students are always good. I was an undergraduate teaching assistant during my university life. it was a great pleasure for me when I could help anyone to solve any problem during the lab class. I have worked as an assistant, now I will work as a teacher. So I will get more opportunities to help the students. I have joined here at last week. hope it will be a exciting journey with the students. take care.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
At first take my love. hope you are all well by the grace of Almigh...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
... thinking to change my track for a long days. Thats why I have joined as a senior le...
^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ing to change my track for a long days. Thats why I have joined as a senior lecturer ...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teaching
...d as a senior lecturer of a university. teaching students are always good. I was an unde...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ng assistant during my university life. it was a great pleasure for me when I coul...
^^
Line 5, column 767, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...dents. I have joined here at last week. hope it will be a exciting journey with the ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 783, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ined here at last week. hope it will be a exciting journey with the students. tak...
^
Line 5, column 821, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...e a exciting journey with the students. take care.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43016759777 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68470486478 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0488611432 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.6470588235 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.5294117647 16.8248392259 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980639793452 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304727809842 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344833364858 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837774530925 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00736192875689 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.23 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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