You have recently started working in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you changed job
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news
Dear Adam,
I am writing this letter to enlighten you, and express my excitement for the new job that I just got last Sunday.
Its been a while that we have not talk to each other, therefore I am so eager to share two tremendous news with you. Firstly, I got appointed as an Assistant Human Resource manager in one of the elite multinational company. To be honest, it was not just a piece of cake, because there were hundreds of candidates in selection process but luckily I prevailed.
The core reason for leaving my old job was that it was a marketing job. While, I have a degree in Human Resource and this new organization good reputation itself was a prime driving factor. So, eventually for my better career I took this incisive decision.
Moreover, you will be glad to know that I finally got engaged to the love of my life and it all happened to quickly that I could not get the opportunity to invite you to the occasion.
I urge you to reply me as soon as you can, as I am looking forward to meet you and share these cherishing moments.
Sincerely yours,
Irfan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'talked'.
Suggestion: talked
...y. Its been a while that we have not talk to each other, therefore I am so eager ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 68, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...oon as you can, as I am looking forward to meet you and share these cherishing moments....
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4824120603 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59179592679 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.018166707 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155071235938 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535323428994 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480628051413 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894812181246 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03116198659 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.