You have recently used the services of a moving company. At the new place you found out that some of your items were badly damaged. Write a letter to the company manager including the following:
Give details of your move.
List items were damaged.
Say what you expect the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with services, which caused damage to my household items, of your packing and moving company National Packers and Movers.
Last weekend on 10th November 2019, I shifted from Leeds to South Sheilds due to the change of my job. I contacted to your office in Leeds for shifting my household stuff as well as furniture. Your employees packed and shifted the items on 11th November in the South Sheilds. When I received items some of them have severe damage and some minor. My washing machine is broken from inside and now it is of no use. The gas of my refrigerator was leaked and mechanic confirmed that gas cylinder is also moved from its place. Some scratches are there on the glass table which I bought recently on my anniversary.
As per your policy, your firm is responsible to compensate any damage occur during movement, I want full refund of my washing machine, repairing charges of refrigerator as well as glass of the table should be replaced with new one. You can send your representative to look for the damages for verification purpose. I hope you would live up to your promises and compensate me financially.
Should you require any further information, feel free to contact me at: +919501133847.
Yours faithfully,
Patrick Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...7. Yours faithfully, Patrick Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89732142857 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81526224899 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620535714286 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3333268023 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3846153846 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202677158376 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721966114411 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034267850613 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109297541611 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252175243642 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.