You have seen an advert in a newspaper for a part-time voluntary job working with children. Write a letter to the employment agency. In the letter
• say what the job you wish to apply for is
• explain why you want to apply for the job
• describe some of the skills and qualities you have that would be useful
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the part-time job advertised on 23rd July 2021 in Times of India, under temporary jobs vacancy.
To begin with, I am expressing my interest to be the part of the same NGO, who has given the requirement to teach children under 10 years that too free of cost. As I am aware that your agency recommend the name to the employer. So I am willing to get myself enrolled for the same.
Furthermore, I love to teach kids, those who cannot afford the education or who has lost their parents. Moreover, I have seen the kids not studying and working like child labor and I think every child has a right to study for the betterment of their future. Also, the future of the country lies on young ones. So I am more inclined to assist lovely kids.
Besides, I would like to tell you that I have taken nursery teachers training and I am very well equipped how to teach children below of classes 1st to 5th. Not only I understand their education parameters but also I have done the pediatric course so I can help them in their diet for healthy growth of brain for grasping early. Above all, I am free in the morning hours from 10AM to 1PM, I would like to dedicate this time for helping these children.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
...2021 in Times of India, under temporary jobs vacancy. To begin with, I am express...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n under 10 years that too free of cost. As I am aware that your agency recommend t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47950819672 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37737066792 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5278504073 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0769230769 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221507088679 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620113417626 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056586871052 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119541742679 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582512069892 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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