Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement published in Daily mail Australia on 23/12/2019 for looking after a six-year-old kid. I want to let you know that I have a very caring and fun loving personality, which made me very interested in this job.
Let me explain you in detail. I'd been working as a child carer in my country since last 6 years. I have an amazing track record of experience in child care industry. I don't see my job as a load of work, I take it as a fun, I enjoy spending time with kids. Moreover, I also educate children while playing games with them so they don't get bored or lose interest.
Furthermore, I always make my time productive with kids. I take them to the parks, keep myself engage with them in healthy activities. Apart from that I love spending time in Museum, where I can give some knowledge to my children.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jay Cutler.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, moreover, regarding, so, while, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55294117647 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7508790668 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7734474642 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238786377336 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073391781374 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661211618058 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13411050058 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754068244395 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.