You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter-
- Explain why you would like the job
- Give details of why you would be suitable person to employ
- Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection to the advertisement published in Times of Australia magazine for the requirement of a baby-sitter.
While I am in Sydney for my 6 month’s post-graduate program, I am looking out for temporary work which can keep me engaged and pay me for my expenses. I always love playing around with toddlers and I believe they are fond of my company very much and that’s why I am interested to take up this role with your family and would want to take care of your offspring.
I have already done similar jobs and hold professional experience from schools. Last year, during my graduation course I did similar part time job in Melbourne where I was teaching pre-school kids with various brain storming activities and encouraging them to learn alphabets through various puzzles, crosswords and other games. Hence I can be a right match for the kind of person you will be looking to baby-sit for your child.
During my leisure time, I would be interested to visit some amazing places in and around Sydney. I think The Lotus Mall is very well known for its architectural master piece and I really excited to witness the beauty soon. Your suggestions will be appreciated for the place that are worth exploring in the vicinity.
Looking forward to hearing back soon with your confirmation for the job.
Yours faithfully,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ring my graduation course I did similar part time job in Melbourne where I was teaching p...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...us puzzles, crosswords and other games. Hence I can be a right match for the kind of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, really, so, well, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83122362869 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79146373026 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9519942115 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.090909091 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244455914658 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850631256956 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491423128136 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132190346198 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286781509156 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.