You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have read an article in an Australian magazine that a family is looking for someone who is able to stay with them for half a year and take care of their child.
Firstly, I would like to tell you that I need this job. To be honest, I currently plan to go to Australia to study abroad and am finding a place to live. I though this advertisement is fit on me because I need to stay with a native family to enhance my English skills.
I provide the details that the reasons why I am an appropriate to hire. I am a quite extroverted person who is confident to have good relationship with anyone. And also I would like to look after babies because they are so cute.
I swear that I may have much time with the family and their baby when I am in Australia. For example, I am willing to go grocery market to buy some ingredients for meal. When I have my leisure time because I like to shop which means this is one of my hobbies. Please contact me if you are interested to recruit.
Your sincerely,
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... to go to Australia to study abroad and am finding a place to live. I though this ...
^^
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...easons why I am an appropriate to hire. I am a quite extroverted person who is co...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, for example, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14705882353 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46449216788 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1245081811 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355183769481 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109608990453 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975616075879 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207598518148 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105893842114 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... to go to Australia to study abroad and am finding a place to live. I though this ...
^^
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...easons why I am an appropriate to hire. I am a quite extroverted person who is co...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, for example, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14705882353 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46449216788 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1245081811 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355183769481 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109608990453 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975616075879 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207598518148 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105893842114 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.