Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I have recently gone through your article posted in an Australian magazine; and found it interesting as I love children. I am currently looking for a job and would like to apply for the position.
Let me give you my background. Do you know Presidency college of Hospitality Management? I have completed my bachelor degree in Hospitality Management from the same college recently. I want to complete my master degree also before joining a fulltime job. Due to some financial limitations, I have postponed my university admission to next year.
This job will enable me to earn some grant and save for my college fees. In the mean time, while I am in Australia, I would like to start my higher studies preparation well in advance to get a scholarship while enrolling for the course.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Chiranjit
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give deta 73
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give deta 73
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter Explain why you would like the job give deta 82
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give deta 73
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give deta 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91612903226 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98400871522 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1696428502 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2727272727 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234509720087 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092350906772 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666124768393 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162769051601 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763106131436 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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