You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.
Write a letter to the couple. In your letter
Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job
Say what else you could do for the family
Give your reasons for wanting the job
Dear Mr Simon,
My name is Kirandeep Kaur, and I am writing this letter in the response to your advertisement uploaded online for teaching one year language course to your children.
I think this job would suit me best because I have many qualities which makes me eligible to carry out my job. To start with, I have enough three years teaching experience to provide necessary language skills. I am currently accommodating 10 minutes walk from your residential area therefore, I can also provide them coaching at home.
Besides this, I have two years of experience in babysitting course so, when you are away at the work, I can take care of them. Apart from this, I can provide your children with physical and nutritional education as I have just completed my bachelor in this field.
In order to pursue my higher education, I was searching for part-time job which would assist me with some earnings. I hope you will find my company best for your children. For further more details you can email me.
Thanks for considering my application, and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Kirandeep kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, therefore, apart from, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9067357513 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71727945078 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3862600535 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0909090909 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32109405277 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12776336784 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700114317365 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187361066025 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591573192563 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.