You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.
Write a letter to the couple. In your letter
- Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job
- say what else you could do for the family
- give your reasons for wanting the job
Dear Mr. And Mrs. Williams,
Few days ago, there was an advertisement settled by your side on the newspaper, requesting an Arabic native teacher to aid your children for their Arabic school course. That is why I am texting you, for this opportunity.
First, let me introduce you more about myself; I am a Lebanese I was born and raised there for 24 years, studied Masters of Arabic Language, then I had the opportunity to move to Australia and be the Arabic coordinator for Catholic schools from 5 years ago till now. Therefore, I am pretty sure that my experience in this language and with students will help your kids to succeed in this subject.
Addition to that, since I work as a part time job now during this summer at the council library, I could arrive earlier in order to assist your child with other class assignments, monitor them while you are outside the house. Such way will let them know me better and make them fell relax while studying.
Moreover, this job honestly means a lot to me since I am working for a part time and my financial situation is getting worst these days, I am willing to accept any offer right now where I can support my little brother in his post graduate course fees, so he can continue his major.
Thank you for understanding, waiting for your answer.
Sincerely Yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ect Addition to that since I work as a part time job now during this summer at the counc...
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Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ns a lot to me since I am working for a part time and my financial situation is getting w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, honestly, moreover, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52765957447 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41601717231 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 235.0 16.3608247423 1436% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1064.0 76.5299724578 1390% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 235.0 16.8248392259 1397% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 53.0 4.34317383033 1220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274139360646 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274139360646 0.0766984524023 357% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149534802647 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12033309289 0.0580467560999 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 117.4 8.37731958763 1401% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -150.13 70.7449484536 -212% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 92.6 7.45979381443 1241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.47 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.98 7.59969072165 237% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 96.0 8.54432989691 1124% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 93.0 8.15463917526 1140% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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