Dear Ms. and Mr. lee,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing with regard to your offered advert on the building board for hiring a teacher.
I do think I am able to teach your children the French language as I am teaching this language at Berford school for almost 10 years. Along with this, I have both practical and academic qualifications for this job. By this I mean, I am a competent teacher for almost 10 years and I know all the ins and outs of this job. it is also noticeable to mention that the children that I am teaching them right now are at the same age as your daughters. Therefore, be certain I have entirely obtained the knowledge of how to deal and communicate with children at this age neatly and flawlessly.
To add on, not only I have a b.a degree in French literature but also I hold an m.a degree in psychology. Hence, some sessions on how you make treating your children a breeze could be offered by me to the whole family. These sessions would make children more willing to trust their parents and build up more connected relationships in families. Further, as I know you are away until 7 pm in case you need someone to take care of your children and fulfil some of your house chores you can count on me due to the fact that I have the experience of babysitting and I am totally free in the evenings.
I am highly interested in being accepted into this job relying on two potent reasons. first and foremost, having a connection with children can lift my spirit up and put me in a huge pleasure and since I am a patient and caring person children would connect with me swiftly. Secondly, I think the salary of AUD 112 per session would be a good financial help for me as it aids me to cover some parts of my living expenses.
For further inquiry, you could reach me via an e-mail address at hivafara@gmail.com.
I am eager to earn your affirmative feedback at your earliest convenience.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... know all the ins and outs of this job. it is also noticeable to mention that the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...this job relying on two potent reasons. first and foremost, having a connection with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i mean, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 937.175257732 172% => OK
No of words: 362.0 206.0 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44751381215 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68560006842 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 127.690721649 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549723756906 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 290.88556701 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1421214121 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7058823529 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321138575118 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973373505498 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572686729121 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140225538081 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775014622917 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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