You have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers, request that the institute sends you their brochure.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inquire about the Spanish language course that your institute has been executed and you have advertised in daily newspaper.
To make the situation vivid, I am enthusiastic to join the course as I work in an international company that has speared-world costumers. I have just finished the intermediate Spanish course tow month age and now, L eagerly want to investigate more detail about the curriculum and teachers. Since, the newspaper advertisement was brief, I would like to know if the teachers are native, because the native speakers give better commands as they know not only academic linguistic knowledge but also urban one and idioms. Additionally, extra information about the issues like fee structure, duration, days of the course and teacher’s names, would help me to make the finest decision.
Finally, I ask if it is possible to send me a detailed brochure about the course and the competitive advantage of your institute over against others.
Looking forward to your response
Yours faithfully
Shima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to your response Yours faithfully Shima
^^^^
Line 19, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... response Yours faithfully Shima
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37426900585 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00624613377 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8006924145 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.285714286 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223831823014 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942589189574 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463357994661 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127334776512 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528324749726 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.