You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper about helping to improve the environment. Write a letter to the editor and explain - Why you are interested in it - How you can help - When you are available
Dear sir,
I am Harry, a professor of computer science in Rhode island university. Yesterday I read an advertisement about helping in environment protection in your weekly publication. I am writing this letter help you voluntarily in this noble cause.
As a responsible citizen of my country, I would like to put some efforts to improve its environmental conditions. Being a professor, I am a role model to many of my students. I would like to set an example that it there is a will there is a way, we all give an excuse of busy lifestyle and family responsibilities, when it comes to return something to our nature.
My working hours are 9am to 5 pm in weekdays and I am free on weekends, so I can help you in the evening or during weekends. our university has around 1500 students, I will ask for donation by each member of university, thus that fund could be used for the betterment of environment. Similarly I can make power point presentations that compares today's landscape conditions with those decades back, thus showing how we had destructed our nature. This will encourage the audience to protect the nature and revoke the destructions if possible.
I will be higly obliged if you give me a chance to be part of this nature protection campaign. You can call me at 401-488-9665 for any other information.
Your's sincerely
harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0952445976 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7290329711 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229527800325 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714911705108 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746267108871 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13851426278 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631340905577 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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