You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter
Tell them where you saw the advertisement
Explain why you would like to go
Describe the skills that you have that you think would help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of volunteer to teach English abroad that advertised on Thanh Nien Newspaper of September 15th 2019.
At present, I am a teacher with more than 5 years of experience. I graduated in pedagogy from Van Lang university in 2014. I am teaching at Nguyen Cong Tru High School. My skills include good communication skill, knowing three languages as English, Chinese, Japanese.
Personally, I am interested with this job because l would always like discovering a new regions and could help their citizens to speak English, especially in developing countries.
If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. I look forward to discussing my credentials with you.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consideration. Your faithfully, Calla Balls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39259259259 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05032324177 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.792592592593 0.622605031667 127% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.581477952 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214751373299 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699519990941 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618351376883 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102547982229 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691390846854 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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