Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in the post of Project Engineer at your new joint-venture, advertisement for which was placed in the Himalayan Times.
I am a graduate from the Kathmandu University, having passed my Bachelor's Degree in Civil Engineering in the year 2011. After graduation, I was accepted as an Assistant Engineer in a Project of National Priority where my technical assistance in implementation of the road and bridge construction works was highly acknowledged. At the end of my assignment, Scholarship to a two-year Masters Program in Construction Management at the Ehime University in Japan proved to be instrumental for my subsequent hands-on experience I received in contract management working for an undertaking financed by a donor agency and employed as a time-based consultant on the same by a Government Department.
my academic qualification and my experience on similar nature of work should testify my ability to perform the job with highest professional standards and fulfill the expected roles of the applied post. I have also attached a resume with this letter for your perusal.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Sohan Chaturvedi
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...ward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Sohan Chaturvedi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34895833333 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33179896326 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.784227702 44.8134815571 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.375 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125130765228 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575919477756 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384152512865 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594710104912 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463306429566 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 7.59969072165 147% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.