Dear Sir,
I am VJT, I live in Nancy bunglow area. I am writing this letter regarding the recent changes you have made for vegetable shop owners in the market.
The recent change of place of vegetable shops on the road side has made our lives vulnerable and chaotic. People face difficulties due to the heavy traffic on road side due to this shops and some of the shop owner also have started throwing garbage on roadside which attracts animals on the road. Dense traffic and animals creates mess on the road and people gets delayed to their work or home.
Request you to please change the place of vegetable shops from roadside to the nearest market in the ground area. It will be helpful for both public and shop owners, people could buy their vegetables with peace and traffic will become smooth on roads. It would also help us to save lives of animal.
I strongly assert that the problem must be addressed at earliest, i am also sending copy of this letter to local news paper.
Yours faithfully
VJT
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 8, column 114, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...so sending copy of this letter to local news paper. Yours faithfully VJT
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62983425414 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16601362647 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8624583222 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171521471043 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732443794433 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710788960161 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115421481253 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733817491327 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.