You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
I am writing you to express my interest in collaborating with your organization. It indeed is a very noble cause in helping the weaker sections of the society and your organization, "Cultural Expeditions" is doing exceptionally commendable job. I would find myself worthy if I get an opportunity to help you as a volunteer.
According to your website, the next project your team is working on is to educate the underprivileged kids of the slums in Dharavi, India. I am an English graduate and I have always believed in uplifting the society by ensuring that a basic education is received by every person. I have in past done small projects with many NGO's where I have the pleasure to pass on my acquired knowledge to others. According to me, my degree, experience and strong willingness to volunteer in your next project is a perfect match.
I would take this as my way to give it back to society. This increases the chances that someday someone may think just like me and the chain continues. Together, it will be better society to live in if everyone cares about everybody. I also believe that with basic education, the kids will grow as a responsible citizens and will engage themselves in skilled activities which can help them stay competitive in today's world.
As a part of corporate social responsibility, my employer allows me leaves of 45 days in a year. I would wish to redeem my all leaves towards your upcoming project. Kindly let me know the process way forward.
Waiting for your positive response.
Thanking you
Yours Faithfully
ABC
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 78
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 86
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ass on my acquired knowledge to others. According to me, my degree, experience and strong willi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92936802974 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03714969526 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7234558146 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 4.34317383033 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126721699229 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424717249796 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472972794632 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569731145375 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558929361408 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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