you live in a room in college which you share with another student. you find it very difficult to study and stay focused
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Anfal Issam, and I am one of your students. I am writing this letter to complain about my accommodation.
To start with, I would like to arrange a booking for a new room next term. I would prefer it to be a single-bedroom, for I have a grueling study, and I need some privacy as well.
Secondly, although this time of the year is the examinations period, my roommate still having parties and inviting her friends to our room. Therefore, I am facing difficulties in concentration on my studies, and my roommate is unconsidering my issues.
Finally, I would be grateful if you could send her a notification to avoid this behavior until my movement is complete. In addition, what suggestions do you advise me to do until next term?
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible and thank you in advance for your anticipated support.
Best regards,
Anfal Issam
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-25 | Eng. Anfal | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your anticipated support. Best regards, Anfal Issam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98857823406 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645962732919 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6425346646 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125427267912 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471978337457 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603914093277 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745534555327 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716630120143 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.