Dear Sir Or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you on the issue of accommodation allocate me. I am leaving on the level four, Room no – 428, I shared this room like other students in this premises. But this fellow makes my life zombie. His behavior is so ugly to me. Firstly, speak louder when he is reading, I cannot focus on my subjects. Secondly, he has a bedtime reading habit, usually, he reads at night with the main light turn on. Which disturbs me in sleeping. Third, he borrows my things without asking my permission. You know how annoying when someone uses your towel, perfumes and clothes. I have worn him so many times not to use bad words, but this time he got physical with me. Now, this is time watering over on my head.
I request you to kindly sift me in a separate room where I can concentrate on my studies. As you know I am score very goods great in my first and second term but if this routine continues with me then I believe this can affect my studies and grades. I am not asking for more facilities, just allow me one separate room with bedsheet and study table. Enough for me.
Looking forward to hearing from very soon.
Yours faithfully,
Budebs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...shared this room like other students in this premises. But this fellow makes my life...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s at night with the main light turn on. Which disturbs me in sleeping. Third, he borr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40909090909 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34369207917 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9040652856 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0588235294 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221060505485 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619094697036 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625779338429 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12761808971 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683586543598 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.