Dear Sir Or Madam,
I am writing this letter to brief your attention to my sharing room. It is located at level four, room NO: 440, I am sharing this room with one student in the same term.
We moved into this accommodation last week only as we both from the same place in hometown. This city is new for both of us.
I request you to kindly change this room arrangement on priority, On the fourth floor there is only one room in the building. And we feel alone on the floor. It is very difficult to know other students and settle down in the different state. Even though, there is building construction work in under process which is completely nearby our back side room window. Our room atmosphere is noise all day. We come to know from construction security guard that the building construction will be finished end of this year and it is very hard for us to focus on our study.
We humbly request you to kindly understand our situation and allocate us a room on the different floor or sift us into the opposite campus building. Where we can concentrate on our studies and shine our college name as a bright student. We do not require many facilities just need two bedsheets and single study table enough for us.
We believe this can be done in time before the semester begins.
Looking forward to hearing from your end.
Yours faithfully,
BUDEBS.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60569105691 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44707681588 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9690717951 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8125 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204078159839 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594192125362 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555969962006 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866498076922 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746929686192 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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