You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Ketti,
I am writing this letter to you about fortnight off from the office to atten my M.com exam. As you know i am doing my masters degree, I know its very difficult for the managment to grant me a leave at this current project. But my collegue Joy will look after in my absent, and he is capable too.
However, before my leave i would like to complete all my pending tasks such as filing work, pending entries etc.. will be done and handover to Joy. after this period of time. I would like to check in one hour early in the office to catch all my pending works including verifiying entires done by Mike. Even though as you know i am very responsible in work. However, i would like to work on week ends if i could not complete pending works.
As you know i am very good in numbring, i can explain how benifit our team after finishing my masters, i am able to submite the report direct to the managment. We do not reuired part time audting firms any more. And i belive this can mitigate our company expenses . As we are spending huge amount in verifiying our accounts.
Thank you so much in advance.
With best regards,
Budebs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ketti, I am writing this letter to you about fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ice to atten my M.com exam. As you know i am doing my masters degree, I know its ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pable too. However, before my leave i would like to complete all my pending t...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...such as filing work, pending entries etc.. will be done and handover to Joy. after...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
...h as filing work, pending entries etc.. will be done and handover to Joy. after this...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...etc.. will be done and handover to Joy. after this period of time. I would like to ch...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...etc.. will be done and handover to Joy. after this period of time. I would like to ch...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...be done and handover to Joy. after this period of time. I would like to check in one hour earl...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...luding verifiying entires done by Mike. Even though as you know i am very responsible in wo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s done by Mike. Even though as you know i am very responsible in work. However, i...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...i am very responsible in work. However, i would like to work on week ends if i co...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...r, i would like to work on week ends if i could not complete pending works. A...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...complete pending works. As you know i am very good in numbring, i can explain...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...As you know i am very good in numbring, i can explain how benifit our team after ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...it our team after finishing my masters, i am able to submite the report direct to...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ect to the managment. We do not reuired part time audting firms any more. And i belive th...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e this can mitigate our company expenses . As we are spending huge amount in verif...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...his can mitigate our company expenses . As we are spending huge amount in verifiyi...
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Line 11, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... much in advance. With best regards, Budebs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3738317757 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28893923772 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2094918947 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231738252631 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720094815225 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514811315432 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132400307212 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399824267699 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.