You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college,in a letter,
1. describe the situation
2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing this letter to tell your good office about the unpleasant situation in my college dormitory. I do have some concerns about the attitude of my flat mate and aside from that I cannot go along with his loud music in which he keeps on playing during bedtime and it really disturb my night rest.
What happen is that my board mate is so harsh at me and he thinks he owned the room. He always shouts at me with-out no reason at all .And the worst thing was the loud music that I’m hearing all the time during nighttime. It really makes me sick & I always been struggling to sleep every night.
I always desire a peaceful room with a considerate roommate, away from distractions and trouble. I would be grateful if you can help me transfer to my preferred accommodation as soon as possible. I will always be indebted to you.
Yours faithfully,
Barry Navarro
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'disturbs'?
Suggestion: disturbs
...on playing during bedtime and it really disturb my night rest. What happen is that m...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s shouts at me with-out no reason at all .And the worst thing was the loud music t...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...shouts at me with-out no reason at all .And the worst thing was the loud music that...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
... nighttime. It really makes me sick & I always been struggling to sleep every night. I a...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rred accommodation as soon as possible. I will always be indebted to you. Your...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65625 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54188325451 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4490634547 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156714353809 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612616173802 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409158002503 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105317132997 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385592635559 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.