You live in a room in a college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation office at the college. In the letter,
Describe the situation
Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am not satisfied with my living condition in our college. While I am happy with my accommodation, I am totally unsatisfied with my current roommate who is making my life difficult here. I hope you will consider my situation favorably.
Let me explain my situation, the trouble started three months age when my roommate first moved in to live with me. My roommate is not organized at all and he does not want to clean our room. Whenever I enter our room, I see his stuff lying on the floor. He plays incessantly loud music at night which distracts me from my study. Moreover, he is very rude to me when I ask him to lower the volume of his music. Because of that, I am not able to sleep properly, and it is also hampering my studies.
Would you kindly transfer me in another room? I would prefer to live with someone who will be quieter since I like to live in a quiet place so that I can concentrate on my study. If someone is quiet and considerable, I won’t have any issues living with him or her.
Thank you for your consideration
Your faithfully,
Rafsun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am n...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your consideration Your faithfully, Rafsun
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Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideration Your faithfully, Rafsun
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39336492891 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62371825595 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6058479355 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3076923077 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193567411698 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755574065898 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526501147346 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130732498958 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400146589387 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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