Write a letter to your tour company manager to appreciate your tour guide

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Write a letter to your tour company manager to appreciate your tour guide

Dear Mr. Tim,

I am writing this letter to thank you for arranging a memorable trip to Cox’s Bazar for me. Even though I had faced some difficulties at the beginning of the trip due to weather, I was totally satisfied with the accommodation and the tour guide you had organized for us. I would like to express appreciation and gratitude to my tour guide, Brian since he was so helpful.

Let me tell about Brian’s contributions during our trip. He always accompanied me, no matter wherever I went. Since he was familiar with all the places and attractions of Cox’s Bazar, he was able to give me a tour of those places. During my trip, one night I got lost in the crowd and I did not even have a phone with me to call someone for help. However, Brian found me with the help of other tour guides and took me to my hotel. I will be forever grateful for the help he provided me that night. He was very punctual and showed me some beautiful sites of Cox’s bazar which mesmerized me.

Would you be kind enough to forward my gratitude to Brian? I hope you will give him a raise soon since he is a hard-working person. I appreciate his efforts during our journey, and I hope he will get rewarded for his dedication towards his work.

Thank you again for your arrangements

Yours sincerely,

Rafsun

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Essays by user rafsunielts2019 :

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56666666667 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66207612693 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.975021468 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2857142857 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136218080675 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488617345438 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604217076761 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881583909795 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563585212724 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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