Some parents think its good to have their children mobile phones, others disagree.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, mobile phones are becoming popular among children. While it is possible that children can use mobile phones to contact their parents in emergency and learn new technologies from mobile apps, it can also negatively impact children such as they may get addicted to using mobile phone. This essay will discuss why giving children mobile phones can be useful for them even though it can create addiction and wrong usage.
Mobile phones are becoming a significant part of our life since we can use it not only for calling and texting but also for using various apps which can help us to do everyday activities. Some parents prefer to give their children mobile phone so that they will able to call or text their parents in emergency. For example, most parents will want to contact their children when they are in workplace and they can do it by using mobile phones. As a result, parents give their children mobile phones so that they can use it to communicate with their parents. Mobile phones also have a lot of educational apps which can help children to learn about different subjects such as learning a new language or learn about new technologies. For these reasons, giving mobile phone can be beneficial for children.
On the other hand, Mobile phone can create some negative issues for children. Children can get addicted to mobile phones which can distract them from their education. For example, a lot of children get caught using mobile phones during class lectures. In addition, Mobile phone can also lead to wrong usage such as children may use mobile phones for watching porn which will negatively impact their mind.
In conclusion, a lot of children has mobile phones now a days and it helps them to contact their parents when they need them. Mobile phone can also offer tremendous benefits for children because it offers a lot of educational apps which help children to gain knowledge about different subjects. In my opinion, if we can control the excessive and wrong usage of mobile phones by children, giving mobile phone to children will be useful for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...on, a lot of children has mobile phones now a days and it helps them to contact their pare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8985915493 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39623125374 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416901408451 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4558508335 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228641221249 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125225098051 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584488520431 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178581774311 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225649956596 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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